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why jereme dean is the realest motherfucker is a b...

2008-08-19T12:28:00.000-04:00

why jereme dean is the realest motherfucker is a blog post coming soon, don't doubt

'frisky'i am leaving my "i heart blake butler" pos...

2008-08-19T11:37:00.000-04:00

'frisky'

i am leaving my "i heart blake butler" post up for ever and ever and ever

it is similiar to the first time i fingered a girl.

i didn't wash my hand for a month.

you are greater than

can you smell the love

liam didnt really hang out, but ye si will include...

2008-08-19T11:30:00.000-04:00

liam didnt really hang out, but ye si will include him

mfa post today perhaps, if i start feeling sassy

joe bolton man. he didn't have c.d. wright to talk...

2008-08-19T02:22:00.000-04:00

joe bolton man.

he didn't have c.d. wright to talk up the shotgun blood blast to the wall. not sure if it was heart of brains.

and that's the shit no one ever wants to talk about.

i want to also read the mfa post. do it. do it.

liam rector specifics. hanging out and whatnot. i guess. not really i suppose.

i will do it

2008-08-19T01:46:00.000-04:00

i will do it

write an mfa posti want to read it

2008-08-19T01:44:00.000-04:00

write an mfa post

i want to read it

brad, i think i did a lot of trying to listen to p...

2008-08-18T23:48:00.000-04:00

brad, i think i did a lot of trying to listen to people also, esp. when i was in mfa, but when i started listening to myself, fueled with the knowledge of what would be expected of me, that seems like when i started doing the things i have been most happy with.

keep finding

Since I came back to words, I've solicited the hel...

2008-08-18T22:26:00.000-04:00

Since I came back to words, I've solicited the help of a couple of forums. They kept telling me to take this out and take that out. It's jarring, they type at me. Those images disrupt and pull a reader from the story.

So, I say ok and ok and ok. They are published and I am not. Or maybe they aren't published and just sound authoritarian. Either way, I figure I better listen. I start stripping all the stuff out that I like and they start to say better, yes, better and at the end it's like, this is ok, you know, you've really suppressed yourself in the text well.

So I put up a story with all that stuff culled out. If it were a tin can and I had a stick, that story would clang when I hit it with the stick. I'm told people like clangs. Lots of views. No responses. Eventually I'm told my punctuation is wrong.

I start to think: hmmm, when I leave that stuff in people really hate it or they like it; it's polarizing. Maybe that's better.

Or not. I don't know. Then I found this collaboration of internet authors and here you are talking about MFA's and the rather stale fiction that they produce, while churning out some startling sentences of your own that almost vibrate when they're read.

It's good stuff. I'm learning more now. A long comment, yes. Sorry. I'm old and I have a lot of words that need to be used.

it is a discontinued klondike bar that had nuts in...

2008-08-18T19:45:00.000-04:00

it is a discontinued klondike bar that had nuts in it

uh what is an mfa again?is that a government agenc...

2008-08-18T19:44:00.000-04:00

uh what is an mfa again?

is that a government agency or a vitamin deficiency

brandon's private circle jerk exhibition, i will w...

2008-08-18T19:01:00.000-04:00

brandon's private circle jerk exhibition, i will wear a lard girdle for the fetishists

also, yes, this is only one 'node' of the circle j...

2008-08-18T19:00:00.000-04:00

also, yes, this is only one 'node' of the circle jerk, the circle jerk is clearly much wider and inclusion of many other kind of sperm

:) ;)

2008-08-18T18:53:00.001-04:00

:) ;)

thank you for the kind words blakey poo.

2008-08-18T18:53:00.000-04:00

thank you for the kind words blakey poo.

Yes. !

2008-08-18T18:43:00.000-04:00

Yes. !

i should write a post about what i think of mfas a...

2008-08-18T18:41:00.000-04:00

i should write a post about what i think of mfas and my experiences,
i have mixed feelings

good will hunting

i have an mfai like mfasbut they smear a lot of wr...

2008-08-18T18:39:00.000-04:00

i have an mfa
i like mfas
but they smear a lot of writers into doing the wrong thing

or hold their hand while they do it

or something

Hold, hold, hold, the circle jerk is WAY bigger th...

2008-08-18T18:38:00.000-04:00

Hold, hold, hold, the circle jerk is WAY bigger than this list. Are u joking? It could have been a rant.

Ok, this subtle (not so) shots-across-the-bow at MFA programs will certainly require a blog/rant/reply, by me.

Blaming MFAs for Carver stories is like blaming law school for G Bush..

No sir

Sean

very good

2008-08-18T17:20:00.000-04:00

very good

good

2008-08-18T17:09:00.000-04:00

good