Thursday, November 1, 2007

Ruiner

(this post is now published on JUKED)

8 comments:

  1. this is good writing. i repeated these lines and slammed my head into the sidewalk outside. the skin from my face is inside the sidewalk's pores now.

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  2. i want to steal some of your skin cells.

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  3. blake. this made me feel really emotional. i liked it quite a bit. you are a good writer.

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  4. woolf, if you do so, spread the skin cells on a christmas tree and listen to your heart beat while the new messiah is born.

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  5. I like this.
    I read a list poem somewhere else that was good also.
    Keep making good things.

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  6. thank you steven. that makes me happy.

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  7. Good lineage, Blake. The other day I found my thoughts taking the form of one of your list poems. I was going to write it down but I lost it before I had a chance. Four lines and many scraps died while thinking of you.

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